Well you tried, but you need some practise. The color scheme is kinda disturbing. Together with the font the image makes it look like a cheap 80's scy fy movie poster. Search on Google for 80's movie posters. You'll see some resemblance. But man, the good once use way less colors and use good fonts / font spacing, you need to get some rest in that image. Kinda cliché, but, really: less is more. Maybe make part of the image an orange cloud (the rest black?), get a font with bigger letters (maybe make them white). Also experiment with font sizes and spacing