Legend of the Stars PLAYER CARDS!
-
Group D is "done", Yudi's card is a WIP atm so it will change soonTM
-
This stuff is even more cringe than the dancing ACU ladder queue.
-
You're just jealous you don't get a card.
-
This is pure gold, can't wait for mine.
-
Those are amazing!
-
-
10/10 Tex card
-
I'm not going to give you too much shit because I gave FtX a beatdown when he showed me your prior version, and thus you iterated on it to make it somewhat better than it was.
Please fix your alignment though because literally every single element is off in some way.
I'm assuming you turned off snapping in Illustrator because normally stuff like this cannot happen unless you want it to, and you dont want it to...
also perhaps
- Dont use gradents on the outside, green and purple normally work together but right now it looks mucky and doesnt fit the rest of the card. (I said earlier: everything looks like it was made in isolation) Just make one part purple and another green or whatever.
- Remove what i can only assume is the "player colours" next to the image. People can tell what the colours are by the card, just make the image fill the whole box.
-
I find it extremely fitting that my achievements are
- Work in progress
-
I have a quote for Swkoll card if you would be interested.
Every person Swkoll beats suffers from deep depression after the harsh realisation that his opponent didn't even need hotkeys to beat them, who knows if he even used his hands at all? -
top kek
Some information about the player, whether its on a card like this or in a profile somewhere in FAF really helps from a casting/watching POV.
-
I don't think having references to religions and / or other discriminative content should be endorsed on an official channel such as FAF Life. I'm referencing to the card of Yudi and Tex.
-
It's not referencing to religion or other discriminative content but rather to specific situations that happened.
-
The Yudi quote is gonna get changed anyway because I didn’t make the character sheets for qualifier winners and the Tex one can just be changed to grace of God if it is that big of a deal.
-
@Tagada We understand that - but the average viewer (especially new people) will not. This is how things get taken out of context. There ought to be different events that happened that are neither of those categories.
A work of art is never finished, merely abandoned
-
“Tex would rather climb rocks then click them”
-
️ tex running from his faf past -
@jip I mean the Yudi one is straight up inflamatory and bad (just a raw placeholder, never meant to be on FAFlive), but the Tex one is fine thought. It's not mocking any religion and for all we know Tex could believe in Allah. Don't see how it's negative or bad to mention Allah over the Christian "God" or I'm misunderstanding the issue altogether lol
-
@biass Well I'm definitely taking some of your feedback. The image and some color fixes I'm going to apply, the alignment is what I would consider a bit off, I would change it as well but I'm tight on time and it would need me to align the 16 cards manually. I didn't turn off snapping xd... I just have the bad habit of making everything on the same layer so Illustrator is trying to snap it to every single other thing and it's hard to align it correctly to what I want it to align.
Funnily enough, it wouldnt even be an issue to apply this feedback had I made this in inDesign, but I didnt know about this until Gieb told me today lol. So since I don't have that much time, I will be limited to the fixes I can apply to the cards for now.
However, I think next time I'll just ask you directly for feedback, maybe could have avoided these issues earlier had I done that. Thanks for your feedback, very solid and clear.
-
This last batch still needs some work on the images but here is the current final design. If you have better suggestions for quotes or images for the players (something funny and meaningful lol) then feel free to suggest it! Very happy with the results of this Javi x FtX work.
