The wololo example you gave is pretty poor in the way of mainstream esport transitions -
But it works because it is decent looking enough, maintains the style of the stream, and is FAST so that people can see what they actually came there to view in the first place because the majority of people don't actually care about it.
Yours is SLOW, and none of the transition elements harmonise with eachother, or with any of the other menus, and neither does the logo, and the parts on the logo don't even harmonise with other parts on the logo, etc.
It's the same issue you have with anything you've posted on this forum, everything seems to be made in isolation without any care about how they work together.
Right now you've detracted from the experience compared to just using the generic fadein/out, because you're just adding mindless bloat.